Blog 9

I. Introduction
A. Hook: Sharing a car
B. Building Context: Working hard to afford a car
C. Thesis: what are the effects  of sharing property
D. Preview of argument: Feeling Oppression


II. Effect 1
A. Transition Phase: At first I was glad to share the car
B. Topic sentence: I got mad at Ana using the car more than I could
C. Explain: It Felt like it wasn't even ours
D. Example: Sharing a toy


III. Effect 2
A. Transition Phase: My unhappiness with our possession
B. Topic sentence: Sharing a car
C. Explain: she felt the need to improve the car without my consent
D. Example: She was putting in toys, air fresheners and other junk


IV. Effect 3
A. Transition Phase: Finally realizing that she need the car more
B. Topic sentence: College and work
C. Explain: Selfish
D. Example: She is paying the bills.

Blog 8

       Almost everywhere you go you see people on their smart phones, texting or going on social media. When people are on their phones and going on social apps like Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, and snapchat.  The cause of this is people would post pictures and post what they would want to say. Mostly because some people would post about how their day is and some people would post anything, I mean people would use social media into their personal diary. Also causes people to be less active or less social in the real world than in the digital world.
      The effects are less real world experience, as the more time people are on social media the more time is spent wasting the day than doing something else. Sure enough the effects also lead to like video games. As people are living in caves (home), and hurting their eyes and going on social media isn't an educational purpose.

Blog 7 cause and effect chain

Jobs today are going overseas to help poor country to boost their economy. Job here in the U.S. are disappearing and it’s harder and harder to find work, especially when you’re young finding work to pay for schooling and supporting your family. Here in the U.S. the government is trying to raise the minimum wage but wouldn't it lead to paying more taxes and the price of living to go up. What the U.S.  Needs is more industrial factories by less transportation overseas the cost would be less. Also were in this industrial/technology phase, where technology is being much more effective and used.