Blog 9

I. Introduction
A. Hook: Sharing a car
B. Building Context: Working hard to afford a car
C. Thesis: what are the effects  of sharing property
D. Preview of argument: Feeling Oppression


II. Effect 1
A. Transition Phase: At first I was glad to share the car
B. Topic sentence: I got mad at Ana using the car more than I could
C. Explain: It Felt like it wasn't even ours
D. Example: Sharing a toy


III. Effect 2
A. Transition Phase: My unhappiness with our possession
B. Topic sentence: Sharing a car
C. Explain: she felt the need to improve the car without my consent
D. Example: She was putting in toys, air fresheners and other junk


IV. Effect 3
A. Transition Phase: Finally realizing that she need the car more
B. Topic sentence: College and work
C. Explain: Selfish
D. Example: She is paying the bills.